Friday, November 27, 2009

Lord of the Flies

By ThreeEyesWorm

1 comment:


    I love the washes and the circular composition. You mentioned that you screwed up the shadows, but I'm not sure what you mean, cause I don't really see any screw ups. I like the energy in the washes, and I really especially like how the shadows of the leaves kind of imply their tropical setting without showing too much of the location.

    For things you could improve on... mostly are nit picky stuff. I'm not sure if it's just me or not, but from here, Ralph's face doesn't look symmetrical. Typically, the pupils should line up with the corners of the mouth, and his right eye looks too far out, and his left eye looks too close to the center. The back ground, where the log and the stone cliff meet, is starting to look a little flat.

    I'm not sure why you decided to use titling letters for all of it. In my opinion, the last sentence would've been more effective if the top bit was in roman, and the last sentence in smallcaps or titling. Not too sure about smallcaps, that's just my personal preference.

    Anyway that's about it! Great job!